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Percival

Percival is the only female member of the round-table, and represents Blaze in the Black Knight. I decided I would do all of Blaze's costumes, and started with this.

Please state the good and bad, and suggest what I could have done better. Thank you!

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Darknesshedge Feb 25, 09

well i thought was good some of the drawing is bad like the sword and the hand holding the sword and is it suppose to be fat

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Blaze Feb 25, 09

Yes, they are gloves and kind of like a gauntlet to hold the sword with. I didn't do the sword too well but...was the coloring and proportioning okay?

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xlXPunkRockerXIx Feb 25, 09

I haven't really played the sonic games all that much so i dotn know what it should look like exactly so a reference pic would be nice but overall its pretty good. The sword could definitely use some touching up and maybe the helmet but otherwise its pretty good, better than anything i could draw.

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Blaze Feb 26, 09

Hey thanks mate, can't show you the source, the pic was on a flash player...thank you.

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Darknesshedge Feb 26, 09

other then those details pretty good old chap

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Blaze Feb 26, 09

Thank you, that means a lot. ^.^

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Darknesshedge Feb 27, 09

no problem * gives her a winking tumb up* i'm a hedgenchidna
name's natari

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G_Murph Feb 28, 09

Very nice. One question though. Are the smudge marks around the hand holding the sword suppose to be there?

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Blaze Feb 28, 09

Nope, they were rubbings out.

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Darknesshedge Mar 1, 09

^^ did everyone have a nice valentine's day

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Jameson user Mar 16, 09

From the view of someone who has artistic experience, and as a critic, I say the limbs need more space to individualize themselves; go for Blaze holding the sword out, blade first, to the viewer. Have her in a fighting stance, both hands gripping the blade. This will allow for a more 3-D experience. Spread her legs apart so she will look ready for action (fighting action, mind, I didn't mean anything dirty) and put in some shading. Perhaps put in a few battle-scars to her armor, maybe tatter her clothes as well as dirty the overall image to provide a battle-worn, badass Blaze.

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Blaze Mar 16, 09

That's some really good advide there. Thank you I'll do that for my next drawing.