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This was drawn on my new tablet so it isn't very good, but I hope that I can get constructive critism on it so I can improve! ^^ She's winking because I have trouble getting the eyes the same size...sorry ^w^'

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ki_ki Jul 25, 08
Try to even out the shoulders a bit. It looks like part of her body got cut off. Make her arms much londer, by spreding them out more. Here is a tutorial showing how to even the eyes:

http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/~japanime/tutorial/head.html

You can see how there is a line that evens out the eyes.
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RebeccaScene Jul 26, 08
Good job! Yes It takes a while to get used to your tablet. Now I can't draw anything without mine. I think the arms are to short. I love your style of drawing a lot. Keep em coming. ^__^
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ArtGirl Jul 26, 08
Hai, that's really good! Wow, how do you draw on a computer, XD...
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Bitter Sweet Jul 27, 08
I agree with Some 1, the arms are a bit too short, but otherwise, it's lovely. I especially like the eye, the way you drew it. Nice jog Ichigo_Rox!
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Vena Jul 27, 08
This is really cute. ^__^ But again the arms are a bit too short, and...uh, it only looks like she has one boob. XDXD
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Ichigo_Rox Jul 27, 08
Lol, her arms ARE short 0_o

I'm working on a harvest moon manga, so I'll post that once the first page is done.
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HarvestMoonLover Jul 31, 08
It's good! I really like the hair and the outfit.
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Ichigo_Rox Aug 23, 08
Thank you.
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